Tuesday, November 18, 2008
Edited Passion writting
My passion is singing because by singing I can express my feelings. When I sing I know when im sad and when im happy. I can always sing. my singing cannot go away from me, nobody can take it away. I love singing because it is very expresive and I can keep it Forever. Singing is a passion because it lets out my emotions and I get to tell everybody how I feel without really telling them.
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Julian, this is the beginning of a plan, but nowhere near a completed essay. Where is your intro? conclusion? Three paragraphs of examples or reasons? Graphic? Julian, you cannot be too very proud of this assignment.
sorry i will improve by this week
Julian, you really need to work on this passion. GOOD LUCK WITH IT!P.S I LOVE CATS.
Julian, I think this piece is nice but you need paragraphing and more words ^_^ ILY Jacqui
You really need to inprove on this with little grammer mistakes that shoudnt be there.
YOU ONLY HAD ONE PARAGRAPH and needs lots of improvement.
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